A rundown of ideas and the current state

Wanted to jot this down while I was thinking of it.

First off, Cloud Story.  I was never satisfied with my interpetation of the events of the war 10 years before Cave Story.  I wanted to make something canon, which I never could have the right to do.  I’m not Pixel!  But, today I had an idea.

Instead of going through the events of 10 years ago as a matter of fact game.  How about I tell a story?  Something like…

“Grandpa Zett!  Grandpa Zett!  Tell me a story!”  “Okay my dear, but then you must sleep!”


“…Once upon a time, the most beautiful Mimiga of…” “Stop!”

“H-huh?”  “Something more exciting!”

“Hmm… how about…”

“There once was a terrible… red demon…!”  “Stop!”

“Chie…?”  “I already know that one!  Grandpa!  Pleasee!  A new story!”

“Oh little one… you know all my stories… ”  “There must be something!”

“Chie…”  “Please, please, please…!”


“It was on a dark and stormy night… ”

And so Zett describes to Chie *his* story, of how he escaped from certain death from the robot invasion… when he encountered two mighty heroes…  Strange robots that were different from the rest.  A boy and a girl…

It was not too long after telling that tale, the events of Cave Story happened.  And the “stories” old Zett told, suddenly became very real in her eyes.  There really was a red demon.  There really were robots that fought to save them.

And so Chie’s thirst for stories… and history grew as she herself did.

Thus Cloud Story begins.  Chie has grown up, and she wants to know the truth.  She wants to record the history of her people.  Of Zett’s stories.  Of who saved them, and what happened before she was born.  Too many people were ignorant of the past, and they paid the price…  But most of all she just has that youthful thirst for knowledge.

And so, in order to piece together the events of the War, and the stories of those who fought.  She would venture out looking for the few people who still remember.  Who can fill in the blanks.  And maybe see these places for herself.

(And so Chie ventures across the island meeting old faces, and some new ones; getting into some trouble, and making new friends… and eventually maybe even one day she’ll find the heroes once more… and hear their true story.)

Something along those lines crossed my mind today, as being a better alternative, than a de facto linear prequel of Cave Story… Probably.  At the very least, it seems like it would make for a more complete, fun tale for all characters involved.

Progress on the mod?  Well Cloud Story has been halted for ages, but it wouldn’t be too much to create a barebones demo.  It might not be a bad idea to get help on the mod after that, for it to survive…
On Nightshade Project…  Things are going horribly slow!  Well, I’ve been occupied by class, but for the most part it’s constantly being set aside for other things[1][2][3].

The last thing I was doing with it was… still figuring out the story.  It’s evolved over time, from one entire story and characters to another.  And currently I’m trying to tie everything together into a timeline of events over character lifetimes.

But, currently there are two major story branches.
There’s the Hunter Arc, and the Nightshade Arc.  And I’m struggling to put it all together.  To tell it in the right order as well…

I can really respect writers who can just crank out page after page of a story, making everything work together on the fly.  I wish I knew their secret… :]

Also, I’ve been intending to use the new GeoBox engine for this project, but if I can’t even settle on exactly what I want to tell; I can’t really plow ahead.

Forgive me, all those who for some reason still end up here looking for progress /o\

([1]The internet is the most amazing thing, but also the greatest unlimited source of distractions that could exist for me!)
([2]Can’t blame others though, it’s my lack of discipline that keeps me from finishing what I start.  But, how do you rewire someone’s brain?  That’s why I need someone to guide/support/force me lol…)
([3]Letting lack of experience act as a roadblock, instead of practicing to overcome my limitations and educate myself.)


About lexarvantalis

I'm a modder working on a mod called... Cloud Story! View all posts by lexarvantalis

4 responses to “A rundown of ideas and the current state

  • Kim Tyranto

    Oh hey you have a blog too 😮

    Anyway I kinda wanna see grown-up Chie all of a sudden D:

  • Shadow027

    Hey, you haven’t updated in a while, and I hope that you are okay. I have been following this mod on and off for the last 2-or-so years, and I hope that, while you might be overburdened, you are still working on this.

    Best regards – A fan

    • lexarvantalis

      Thanks Shadow027, I’m working on NightShade Project at the moment. Though Cloud Story somehow still isn’t dead. The support is appreciated!

      Life is coming at me fast, and I just want to hit the pause button so I can make this too 😉

      • Shadow027

        Don’t we all want to have a pause button in life. Anyway, I am glad to hear that Cloud Story isn’t dead, and I hope you do well in your endeavors.

        – A Fan

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